PyWeek - SmokTwix+ - feedback

Cute visual novelette with some action. Nice work, but it wasn't obvious what your hook into the Pyweek theme was.

I feel like time went into the production, but the camera was really weird and again high resolution window with no option for resizing. game controls were a little off.

I appreciate the "skip" button to get through all the reading, and jump into the game play.

That's a lot of text and not much game but well done on completing something.

Maybe did not finish? I walked around and got directly to the finish. I hope you finish the game sometime. You should make the foreground stand out, the background should be dimmer. Nice character!

Ha ha, a dancing super hero (jump and stay up in the air).

Too much text. I confess, I haven't read it all.

This entry would’ve worked for pyweek 35 not 36 :skull:

Good effort. I think it would have been better if the screen size was more standardised or changeable

Too much text.

It is too simple, I just found the relic in about 20secs and thats it.

I struggled reading the large amount of text. but otherwise i thnk you managed to make a neat game :)

The game itself was nice but a bit bland.

I was very impressed by the amount of lore and story that was in place, very nice :D

Good narration, but I didn't enjoyed that much _:D

That was a pretty long and detailled back-story: I like it, but I wish I got to experience more of Kairos's adventures in the game instead of just in story :) ... also, there needs to be more use of full stops in that story. I liked the artwork for the character and the world!

this was pretty fun, there was more reading than actual gameplay though, I would love to see more this game being expanded with more mazes or a bigger world

-Massive text dumps that immediately disinterest the player
-Hard to make out the layout of the level
-Would have been nice to see some more levels

Cute artwork and story :)

Window was too tall for my screen. Couldn't figure out how to proceed from second image, possibly related to first issue

It was a very long story to read through and the focus should have been on the game rather than on the story.