PyWeek - Text based phone game - feedback

Fun Prod Inno Disq N/W Comments
2 2 3

I usually like these type of games, but I thought this one was too simplistic. That's fine
though since you coded it in an afternoon. Commands weren't very clear, but that's ok because I
just opened the source file to look at the commands. I'm impressed that you coded this on a phone
(though I wonder why). Had you made a longer version of this game with more interesting
puzzles, I probably would have liked it more.

2 1 3

Not bad for something put together in an afternoon. I would have liked a little more in the way of
hints, but not too bad.

3 3 4

I came to life to late to know how to play txt games :(

3 2 1

Pretty cool, especially that you did it on your phone! The game is short and offers nothing new.
The commands and responses are lacking in many ways. The "drawer" must be opened to win, but it
is never mentioned in the descriptions. "Open dresser" does not work.

3 2 2

That's a short text-based game, but well, it is still entertaining.

4 3 3

Enjoyed this tiny text-based adventure game. I always ended up taking the pill and die! After
numerous tries I had a look at your source to figure what else could have been possible =). I
liked the last line: "And it only took you ... moves to manage it!" Especially hilarous if you do
not make it!

3 2 3

I'm totally not an adventure game kind of guy. Even less a text adventure. Probably would have
never finished the game if I had not looked into the source.

I found it very hard to even know which commands were available (or is that normal for text
adventures?)

A bit more feedback would have been nice. Something like "open rope - you can't open that" and
"swallow pill - unknown command"

But all in all not a bad try for a game entirely coded on a phone…

2 3 2

Not bad for an afternoon on the phone.

3 3 3

I did not try everything but I looked a bit at the source and there seems to be a lot of content!

2 1 3

Impressive that you were able to do this all on your phone. I must admit that I cheated looking at
the source code to solve the puzzle!

1 1 2

Totally text based adventure. Unfortunately it would crash often … no introduction, had to
look at code to work out how to play. Maybe all text based adventure games are like this (can't
say I have a great appreciation for the genre). Still, well done for knocking it together in a
day from a phone. It's pretty impressive considering this.

2 3 2

Average production score only because I can't imagine typing code on a cell phone. Not
surprised your phone file doesn't work, i'm guessing you didn't have a python on your phone? :)

3 3 2

Extra point for production because you wrote it on a smartphone. Pretty basic little game with
a scenario I'm used to seeing in text-based games. Works perfectly!

4 3 4

This game sounded really cool i was not expecting much but it ended being really cool and super
cool. Nice Job.

1 1 1 yes

It just gave me an invalid syntax and I was to lazy to fix it and it's rude to fix other's code.